It was a dark gloomy ancient night this man was on the run of his life to paradise island with sun all around it it would never be night but then one day there was he had been dreaming of it since day one and he saw it on Television. he went on the bus to the island he got there wow he seed as walking out of the bus and his papa was there and said are you lost to me I said yes he said do you need help I said yes to him then he took me to the beach and it was cool as I would love to live there I said he said you can live with me are you shower he said yes he said yip I told him to tell my mum and dad they said that I was old enough to live there and he lived happily ever after Then when he started to go to school he was a good boy like then he meets arana that was so bad he was his best friend 1
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ReplyDeleteHi Roman I like your story it was very creative. But next time you can add more detail. Cool story. Your friend, Hayden.
ReplyDeleteHi Roman I like your story it was very creative. But next time you can add more detail. Cool story. Your friend, Hayden.
ReplyDeleteHi Roman I like your story it was very creative. But next time you can add more detail. Cool story. Your friend, Hayden.
ReplyDeleteHi Roman I like your story it was very creative. But next time you can add more detail. Cool story. Your friend, Hayden.
ReplyDeleteHi Roman I like your story it was very creative. But next time you can add more detail. Cool story. Your friend, Hayden.
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ReplyDeleteA cool story. Maybe next time put in some more punctuation so it makes more sense.
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