Kia ora! I am a year 6 student in room 5 at Ahipara School, in the far North of New Zealand. My teacher is Ms Peters. This is where I share my learning.
Hi Roman it is will from Pompallier school I really like this slide about that you are learning to write one hundred words in ten minutes. We have done 100 word stories too, you really have to be precise with your words.
Hi Roman. This is a good story. I like horror stories. It was a little confusing though, I can't really explain why, and maybe you could check your punctuation. Thanks
Hi Roman it is will from Pompallier school I really like this slide about that you are learning to write one hundred words in ten minutes. We have done 100 word stories too, you really have to be precise with your words.
ReplyDeleteHi Roman.
ReplyDeleteThis is a good story. I like horror stories.
It was a little confusing though, I can't really explain why, and maybe you could check your punctuation.
Thanks